Just saw it. Jokes could use a bit more polish but on the whole it was pretty good. Your camera work seems a bit crazy at times. I swear at one point you zoomed up on absolutely nothing just to return back to the original frame.
Still your next one will no doubt be better. G'luck ;)
XionGlydus
Just watched the video in the "Under Judgment" section. Looks to have great potential for an awesome new series so I hope you follow your dream and make something that is truly sweet!
Keep it up, man!